Magic Biscuits
One Day I went to the supermarket and I saw they had a new Sale it was magic biscuits so I bought the same. It cost $20. I went Home. 2 hours later I called my Dogs.
I got the Dog food they grow so fast so I grab some water and wash the magic out of the dogs I was happy that my
dog's shrunk back to normal good I Love my Dogs I gave them new biscuits that weren't magical the dogs Loved them the End.
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Hi Holley.Im Lilly from Yaldhurst Model School.I like that amazing story about the dogs you have written.I like the dogs munching on the food.How many stories have you made?bye
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I like the Big dogs Holley. I thenc zose dogs like that man.
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