Giraffe Hotel.
I see a giraffe looking through my window.I hear a giraffe creeping up on me.
I feel a giraffe soft haed
I smell the yummy food. it would smell delicious.
I taste same good food like sweet colourful doughnuts.
After being with the giraffe I would feel tired and hungry because would wake me up and eat my food.
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Hi Holley, this is good work. Would you like staying at a hotel with giraffes? I think it would be a great experience.
ReplyDeleteHello Scott. I would love to stay with the giraffes. I love animals.
DeleteHi Holley my name is Dominick this is good work next time you could add some more detail
ReplyDeleteHi I am India from Yaldhurst Model School. I liked this because you explained how you feel. I've learnt about the giraffes at the giraffe hotel. Next time you could ad more information. Was it fun? From India.
ReplyDeleteHi Holley. I am Bella From Yaldhurst Model School. I love these cute giraffes. How come you came up with this animal? I love the name of your title of the giraffes called Giraffe Hotel. When I read your post I learnt about your senses: Hearing,Seeing,Touching,Tasting and Smelling. This taught me about what you can see and what you can hear. I love your post.
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Hi Holly I'm Riley from Yaldhurst Model School. I love giraffes because they are cool. If there was a really tall tree they will be able to eat leaves from it because it wouldn't be that high because of their long necks. Did you know that each giraffes have different patterns? This reminds me of when I did a long write about giraffes. It's fun reading about giraffes.
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hi Holly I like the picture there really funny. why are 3 giraffe's sticking out of the window? why are the giraffe licking the boy the girl and the girl's lollipop?
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